阶段 1（0-3 秒）：广角电影镜头，ARTEMIS 机甲（Moonstrike Precision Frame）伫立在月光下夜晚被摧…

STAGE 1 (0-3 seconds): Wide cinematic shot of the ARTEMIS mecha (Moonstrike Precision Frame) standing in a destroyed industrial zone at night under moonlight. It holds its large crescent rail bow in a ready position. The mecha slowly raises the bow and begins spinning it on a clear central axis, gradually increasing speed like a high-speed propeller. STAGE 2 (3-6 seconds): The spinning crescent bow builds intense blue energy. Bright energy crackles and compresses at the center of the weapon as it spins faster. The mecha’s body stays stable while only the bow mechanism rotates at high speed. Strong energy glow and particle effects. STAGE 3 (6-8 seconds): The bow reaches peak charge with bright blue-white energy concentrated in the center. The mecha stops the spin cleanly and immediately begins firing. STAGE 4 (8-10 seconds): The ARTEMIS unleashes a rapid barrage of blue plasma bolts from the bow’s central mechanism in multiple directions. Bright muzzle flashes, energy trails, and recoil effects with each shot. Final wide shot showing the aftermath with residual energy glow on the weapon. Key Improvements Made: Issue in Original Attempts: Fix Applied. Unclear spinning motion. Clearly stated “spins on a clear central axis” + “only the bow mechanism rotates.” Weak energy build-up. Used staged charging language based on the reference sheet. Messy transition to firing. Clean stop of spin → then rapid barrage. Poor weapon fidelity. Referenced the Crescent Rail Bow design from your sheet.

阶段 1（0-3 秒）：广角电影镜头，ARTEMIS 机甲（Moonstrike Precision Frame）伫立在月光下夜晚被摧毁的工业区中。它以备战姿态手持大型月牙轨道弓。机甲缓慢抬起弓，并开始围绕清晰的中心轴旋转，逐渐加速，如同高速螺旋桨。 阶段 2（3-6 秒）：旋转的月牙弓积蓄起强烈的蓝色能量。随着旋转加速，明亮的能量在武器中心噼啪作响并被压缩。机甲本体保持稳定，仅弓部机构高速旋转。强烈的能量光辉与粒子特效。 阶段 3（6-8 秒）：弓达到峰值充能，明亮的蓝白能量汇聚于中心。机甲干净利落地停止旋转，立即开始射击。 阶段 4（8-10 秒）：ARTEMIS 从弓的中心机构向多个方向释放出密集的蓝色等离子弹丸。每一次射击都伴随明亮的枪口闪光、能量尾迹与后坐力效果。最后一个广角镜头展示射击后的余波，武器上残留着能量辉光。 主要改进之处： 原版问题：已应用的修正。旋转动作模糊——明确写明“围绕清晰的中心轴旋转”+“仅弓部机构旋转”。能量蓄积薄弱——根据参考表使用了分阶段蓄能描述。过渡到射击混乱——干净停止旋转→再进行密集射击。武器还原度不足——参考了你的设定表中的月牙轨道弓设计。